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Hunter | Hotchner/Reid | NC17 | 1/1
May. 11th, 2009 at 10:13 PM
Title: Hunter Author: Lady Angel Fandom: Criminal Minds Genre: Slash, AU Pairing: Hotchner/Reid Rating: NC17 Author's Note: Inspired by Hannibal.
"Hello, Spencer." Half desperately wanting to hang up, half utterly fascinated by the man, Spencer Reid swallowed, griping the phone even tighter. "Hello, Aaron." "How are you today?" Deep, smooth, cultured voice purring the question. "I'm fine. And you?" "I find myself missing you, Spencer." Reid closed his eyes, unoccupied hand clenching around his kitchen table as he mostly played along. "You're always welcome to visit, Aaron, you know that."
Smokey laughter that sent shivers down his spine. "Oh, Spencer, I would. Only if it was just you and me." "I could--" Pleased, thoroughly amused laughter stopped him. "Oh, Spencer, only if you could. Goodbye, sweetheart." He listened to the dial tone for one split second before dialing. "Garcia, did we get him?" "Oh honey, no, we didn't. The trace bounced all over. . . ." He barely listened, barely heard, still hearing that voice in his head, feeling phantom hands covered in blood but loving his body so sweet.
~*~*~*~*~*~
"Hello, Spencer, did you find my gift?" Reid tried to ignore the busy activity buzzing around him. Cops and CSIs documenting the scene, not a single one trying too hard to find evidence. After all, they all knew who did this, they all knew who the killer was. He had left his calling card: a single, perfect white rose and a poem addressed to Special Agent Dr. Spencer Reid of the FBI's BA unit. "Yes, Aaron, I did." "Another rose for your collection." He didn't touch the petals but knew they would be soft and fragrant. "Yes, another one."
~*~*~*~*~*~
Spencer was a beautiful, brilliant young man. A heavy sleeper because he never slept enough, so utterly dedicated to the job, to the chase. He brushed his fingers through softly burnished hair, enjoying the silken rasp against his fingertips. Even smoother, softer skin behind the vulnerable hollow of his ear, begging to be kissed. Helpless to resist, he pressed reverent kisses to skin and lips, the barest touch to savor the taste of this slumbering loveliness. Pulling the duvet up closer, cocooning Spencer in warmth, he stole one last kiss before stealing away.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Reid woke to quiet, sultry jazz drifting through his apartment, the smell of heavenly lasagna clinging to the notes. Candlelight illuminated white linen, bone china, and sterling silver. Ruby wine in a crystal goblet, white roses in a delicate vase, heavy cotton rag bearing a simple note: Spencer, eat, rest. Doors and windows still locked, security system still activated. He wanted to throw it all away, to call the others, report this, have it all taken away by forensics. Instead, he served himself perfectly done pasta, knowing nothing of forensic use would be found in the food, in the tablescape. Five times he told the others about the gifts, brought them into the labs to be tested and documented, five times nothing was found. Now, he no longer told the others. Didn't tell anyone about the meals left on a semi-regular basis, never a pattern but predictable all the same, showing up after a particularly bad case. Didn't tell them about the sinful sheets that had appeared on his bed, blushing even as he sank into high count softness, thinking about the provocative note found on his pillow. Sleep naked for me.
~*~*~*~*~*~
He studied the pale beauty spread across navy blue sheets, naked except for the top sheet, clinging to the small, high curve of Spencer's ass. Took pleasure in knowing the younger man never slept naked before, only doing so at his request. Aaron locked the wide, special cuffs around slim, slim wrists before shedding his own clothes. Flicking the sheet aside, he savored the drag of skin on skin, blanketing his lover's body with his own. Smiled into unruly curls as Spencer blinked awake, body still soft with sleep. "I missed you, Spencer." "Aaron?" Adorable little frown when he realized he couldn't move his arms, glaring up at the cuffs and chain attached to the headboard. Hazel eyes no longer sleep-muddled eyed him. "Aaron, let me go." He slid down Spencer's body, pausing at the sweet small of his back, pressing his lips into it, licking the sensitive skin, loving the gasps of pleasure from above. "No," he said, smiling into the little dip, surging back up. "No, I don't think I will." Spencer gasped into his mouth this time, falling into deep kisses, not fighting Aaron at all. He worshiped his lover that night, sweeping hands and reverent lips. Loved him until his back was a needful curve, pleas falling from trembling lips, hands fighting against his bonds, desperate to touch as to be touched. Long legs spread, slim hips enticed with every shift, every squirm. He loved it all, wanted it all, wringing cries and whimpers with every sultry touch. But Aaron loved the cooing best, the sibilant sound as he sank deep inside, the joyful relaxation of Spencer's face. Loved the cry of his name as Spencer climaxed even more, the last thing he heard before
following him into bliss. He unlatched the cuffs, smiling as Spencer's hands immediately sank into his hair and curled around his shoulder. Never once did they stray to the button that would bring the police from downstairs. He kissed him, claiming, marking, devouring. The hitch of breath pulled him back. Aaron touched the tears slowly falling down sex flushed skin. "Sweetheart?" Spencer's voice was thick with emotion but his eyes were focused through the gleam of tears. "Why can't I hate you?"
~*~*~*~*~*~
VIGILANTE STRIKES AGAIN The newspapers all screamed the same headline. The news shows all showed the same yet different clips of people's reactions. Most thought the vigilante was an answer to a prayer, others thought him just another dangerous criminal. A dichotomy, a contradiction. A serial killer of child molesters, the predator of pedophiles. Once, a man of the law, now driven past the breaking point by the rape and murder of his only son. Once Reid's lover, now his prey. The End Tags:
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lerabird wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:29 am (UTC) That was beautiful. I just... beautiful. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 12:49 pm (UTC) lera, thank you so much! I was surprised that anyone would find it before I posted it everywhere . . . mostly because it wasn't really finished. I've changed a few things, added in a scene, if you'd like to read it again. thank you again for the lovely, lovely feedback. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread | Expand (no subject) - lerabird - May. 12th, 2009 08:58 pm (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - dameange - May. 12th, 2009 09:38 pm (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - lerabird - May. 13th, 2009 01:44 am (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - sabora - Mar. 16th, 2010 04:09 am (UTC) - Expand
agent182 wrote: May. 12th, 2009 01:07 pm (UTC) ooo very interesting. I like where this is going.... It's very well written. It's a one shot but... it'd be really rad if you continued. Pwetty pwease? <3 Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC) first off, thank you! secondly . . . uhm, well, I'm not sure what else there is to say in this story. but if for some reason my muse decides that there is more to say, I will definitely write more. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
califmole wrote: May. 12th, 2009 01:51 pm (UTC) Wow, lovely story, beautifully twisted--heartbreaking and yet tender. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC) thank you so very much for the lovely feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
dragontatt wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:13 pm (UTC) This is awesome and I second the request for a sequel... Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC) thank you! as for a sequel . . . we'll have to see what the muse thinks, yeah? {wink} Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
hilsongirl wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:38 pm (UTC)
I love this! And I totally understand why Spencer can't hate him. Poor Jack and poor Aaron. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC) {nods} amen. thank you for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
winky3018 wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC) Wow! A lovely story for the boys. I wouldn't mind more of this storyline. *hugs* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:41 pm (UTC) thank you very much! as for more . . . we shall have to see what the muse thinks, yeah? {wink} Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
kyrdwyn wrote: May. 13th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC) omg, poor boys! I can so see this, though. And see why Spencer can't hate him. Love is an odd thing...... Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:48 pm (UTC) oh yes it is. thank you for the lovely feedback, kyr! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
punishmentally wrote: May. 13th, 2009 03:13 am (UTC) this is amazing. i like hannibal and this was a perfect fitting of the criminal minds verse to the hannibal one. beautiful. and i agree that a sequel would be lovely, but not necassary this stands just fine on its own. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:51 pm (UTC) thank for the lovely, lovely feedback. I was watching the movie, saw the scene where hannibal was in sterling's apartment, touching her and lighting candles. I immediately saw Hotch and Reid in those roles. it was truly an instance of inspiration and I'm so glad so many people are enjoying the fic. and thank you again for letting me know you too enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
indigocat wrote: May. 14th, 2009 01:12 am (UTC) Distrubing, but good. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:52 pm (UTC) lol thank you! exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
sin_of_pride wrote: May. 14th, 2009 01:21 am (UTC) Very intriguing, I loved the concept! I'd vote for a more in depth look at what this ficlet creates rather than a sequel, if your muse ever comes back this way :D I love how Hotch still takes care of Reid despite everything. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC) if the muse ever comes back to this fic I will definitely write more. thank you for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
whatshername87 wrote: May. 17th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC) Wow...I'm speechless. That was gorgeous! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 17th, 2009 11:24 pm (UTC) Wow, speechlessness? Most awesome! Thank you! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
moonflower75 wrote: May. 26th, 2009 12:37 am (UTC) Ouch!!!! Poetic and painful. I haven't seen 'Hannibal' so I didn't know what I should expect and I loved it. You nailed perfectly what is the one thing that could drive Hotch insane and turn him into one of the perps they hunt down. And the confusion in Reid's reaction shows exactly what love can be like. thank you so much for sharing Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jul. 9th, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC) And thank *you* for such lovely feedback! I always figured Hotch was just so intense that if he wasn't a good guy he would totally be a badass bad guy! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
gwaciemcgeek wrote: May. 30th, 2009 11:34 pm (UTC) That was a fantastic story. I really really loved it. It was breathtakingly beautiful and sweet. Is it wrong that I think Hotch makes a great serial killer? Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jul. 9th, 2009 03:15 pm (UTC) Oh no, darlin', it isn't wrong at all. {nods} Thank you so much for the lovely feedback; I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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wickedground wrote: Aug. 16th, 2009 06:03 pm (UTC) this was beautiful and sad :( Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Aug. 25th, 2009 02:49 pm (UTC) thank you again, wicked! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
crydwyn wrote: Aug. 28th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC) Chilling and yet quite beautiful, thank you :D Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Oct. 27th, 2009 01:23 am (UTC) Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it struck that perfect chord between scary and beautiful. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
evil_killer_cat wrote: Aug. 31st, 2009 11:47 pm (UTC)
heartbreaking but so beautiful. wonderful story Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Oct. 27th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC) Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
kaimore wrote: Nov. 7th, 2009 03:00 am (UTC) That was creepy yet beautiful. I thought at first it was just totally AU, that Spencer had never known him as anything but a killer, and I'm glad that wasn't the case. Ohhh that last tine! *shivers* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) thank you very much for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
empressnan wrote: Nov. 7th, 2009 06:10 am (UTC) I thoroughly enjoyed this! I could so see Hotch going that route if that really happened to Jack. Fantastic job!! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) thank you! glad you enjoyed it! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
meganmayhem94 wrote: Nov. 13th, 2009 07:10 am (UTC) ..............I can't decided whether to hug or high five you! sooo how about both! *HugFive* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) lol thank you! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
artmyth wrote: Dec. 6th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC) Oh! God, would I love to see you take this further, to see their past, their future! ^^ Anyway, great piece. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:27 pm (UTC) thank you very much! their future . . . wow, I can't see anything but heartbreak there, but you never know where the muse will take me. thanks again! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (no subject) - dameange - Jan. 19th, 2010 08:27 pm (UTC) - Expand
wolfmoon8719 wrote: Dec. 15th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC) sweet heart, are you trying to kill me? Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:28 pm (UTC) {purrs} did I succeed? Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (Anonymous) wrote: Jan. 30th, 2010 05:56 am (UTC) Oh My, Super!Sexy!Creepy Hotch. More please Link | Reply | Thread
hippediva wrote: Jan. 31st, 2010 04:10 am (UTC) Well, thank you so much! Very beautifully evocative and chilling. Brava! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Feb. 22nd, 2011 06:08 pm (UTC) thank you so much for the lovely feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
cmali wrote: Feb. 6th, 2010 12:52 am (UTC) Wow. That was fantastic, and could so easily happen to ANY of the characters. However, I do love the story and the characterization of both Hotch and Reid. Beautiful, and yet, heart wrenching. It would be so hard to watch Reid fall in love, and then be so far from being able to have it. Just a phenomenal story, and I do hope you carry it on. Thank you so much, love. Momma. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Feb. 22nd, 2011 06:09 pm (UTC) Thank *you* for such wonderful feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (Anonymous) wrote: Feb. 16th, 2010 11:21 pm (UTC) would love to see a sequel were reid makes the choice of turning hotch in or joining him. Link | Reply | Thread Page 1 of 2 << [1] [2] >> ( 67 comments — Leave a comment )
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Hunter | Hotchner/Reid | NC17 | 1/1
May. 11th, 2009 at 10:13 PM
Title: Hunter Author: Lady Angel Fandom: Criminal Minds Genre: Slash, AU Pairing: Hotchner/Reid Rating: NC17 Author's Note: Inspired by Hannibal.
"Hello, Spencer." Half desperately wanting to hang up, half utterly fascinated by the man, Spencer Reid swallowed, griping the phone even tighter. "Hello, Aaron." "How are you today?" Deep, smooth, cultured voice purring the question. "I'm fine. And you?" "I find myself missing you, Spencer." Reid closed his eyes, unoccupied hand clenching around his kitchen table as he mostly played along. "You're always welcome to visit, Aaron, you know that."
Smokey laughter that sent shivers down his spine. "Oh, Spencer, I would. Only if it was just you and me." "I could--" Pleased, thoroughly amused laughter stopped him. "Oh, Spencer, only if you could. Goodbye, sweetheart." He listened to the dial tone for one split second before dialing. "Garcia, did we get him?" "Oh honey, no, we didn't. The trace bounced all over. . . ." He barely listened, barely heard, still hearing that voice in his head, feeling phantom hands covered in blood but loving his body so sweet.
~*~*~*~*~*~
"Hello, Spencer, did you find my gift?" Reid tried to ignore the busy activity buzzing around him. Cops and CSIs documenting the scene, not a single one trying too hard to find evidence. After all, they all knew who did this, they all knew who the killer was. He had left his calling card: a single, perfect white rose and a poem addressed to Special Agent Dr. Spencer Reid of the FBI's BA unit. "Yes, Aaron, I did." "Another rose for your collection." He didn't touch the petals but knew they would be soft and fragrant. "Yes, another one."
~*~*~*~*~*~
Spencer was a beautiful, brilliant young man. A heavy sleeper because he never slept enough, so utterly dedicated to the job, to the chase. He brushed his fingers through softly burnished hair, enjoying the silken rasp against his fingertips. Even smoother, softer skin behind the vulnerable hollow of his ear, begging to be kissed. Helpless to resist, he pressed reverent kisses to skin and lips, the barest touch to savor the taste of this slumbering loveliness. Pulling the duvet up closer, cocooning Spencer in warmth, he stole one last kiss before stealing away.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Reid woke to quiet, sultry jazz drifting through his apartment, the smell of heavenly lasagna clinging to the notes. Candlelight illuminated white linen, bone china, and sterling silver. Ruby wine in a crystal goblet, white roses in a delicate vase, heavy cotton rag bearing a simple note: Spencer, eat, rest. Doors and windows still locked, security system still activated. He wanted to throw it all away, to call the others, report this, have it all taken away by forensics. Instead, he served himself perfectly done pasta, knowing nothing of forensic use would be found in the food, in the tablescape. Five times he told the others about the gifts, brought them into the labs to be tested and documented, five times nothing was found. Now, he no longer told the others. Didn't tell anyone about the meals left on a semi-regular basis, never a pattern but predictable all the same, showing up after a particularly bad case. Didn't tell them about the sinful sheets that had appeared on his bed, blushing even as he sank into high count softness, thinking about the provocative note found on his pillow. Sleep naked for me.
~*~*~*~*~*~
He studied the pale beauty spread across navy blue sheets, naked except for the top sheet, clinging to the small, high curve of Spencer's ass. Took pleasure in knowing the younger man never slept naked before, only doing so at his request. Aaron locked the wide, special cuffs around slim, slim wrists before shedding his own clothes. Flicking the sheet aside, he savored the drag of skin on skin, blanketing his lover's body with his own. Smiled into unruly curls as Spencer blinked awake, body still soft with sleep. "I missed you, Spencer." "Aaron?" Adorable little frown when he realized he couldn't move his arms, glaring up at the cuffs and chain attached to the headboard. Hazel eyes no longer sleep-muddled eyed him. "Aaron, let me go." He slid down Spencer's body, pausing at the sweet small of his back, pressing his lips into it, licking the sensitive skin, loving the gasps of pleasure from above. "No," he said, smiling into the little dip, surging back up. "No, I don't think I will." Spencer gasped into his mouth this time, falling into deep kisses, not fighting Aaron at all. He worshiped his lover that night, sweeping hands and reverent lips. Loved him until his back was a needful curve, pleas falling from trembling lips, hands fighting against his bonds, desperate to touch as to be touched. Long legs spread, slim hips enticed with every shift, every squirm. He loved it all, wanted it all, wringing cries and whimpers with every sultry touch. But Aaron loved the cooing best, the sibilant sound as he sank deep inside, the joyful relaxation of Spencer's face. Loved the cry of his name as Spencer climaxed even more, the last thing he heard before
following him into bliss. He unlatched the cuffs, smiling as Spencer's hands immediately sank into his hair and curled around his shoulder. Never once did they stray to the button that would bring the police from downstairs. He kissed him, claiming, marking, devouring. The hitch of breath pulled him back. Aaron touched the tears slowly falling down sex flushed skin. "Sweetheart?" Spencer's voice was thick with emotion but his eyes were focused through the gleam of tears. "Why can't I hate you?"
~*~*~*~*~*~
VIGILANTE STRIKES AGAIN The newspapers all screamed the same headline. The news shows all showed the same yet different clips of people's reactions. Most thought the vigilante was an answer to a prayer, others thought him just another dangerous criminal. A dichotomy, a contradiction. A serial killer of child molesters, the predator of pedophiles. Once, a man of the law, now driven past the breaking point by the rape and murder of his only son. Once Reid's lover, now his prey. The End Tags:
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lerabird wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:29 am (UTC) That was beautiful. I just... beautiful. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 12:49 pm (UTC) lera, thank you so much! I was surprised that anyone would find it before I posted it everywhere . . . mostly because it wasn't really finished. I've changed a few things, added in a scene, if you'd like to read it again. thank you again for the lovely, lovely feedback. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread | Expand (no subject) - lerabird - May. 12th, 2009 08:58 pm (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - dameange - May. 12th, 2009 09:38 pm (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - lerabird - May. 13th, 2009 01:44 am (UTC) - Expand (no subject) - sabora - Mar. 16th, 2010 04:09 am (UTC) - Expand
agent182 wrote: May. 12th, 2009 01:07 pm (UTC) ooo very interesting. I like where this is going.... It's very well written. It's a one shot but... it'd be really rad if you continued. Pwetty pwease? <3 Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC) first off, thank you! secondly . . . uhm, well, I'm not sure what else there is to say in this story. but if for some reason my muse decides that there is more to say, I will definitely write more. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
califmole wrote: May. 12th, 2009 01:51 pm (UTC) Wow, lovely story, beautifully twisted--heartbreaking and yet tender. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC) thank you so very much for the lovely feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
dragontatt wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:13 pm (UTC) This is awesome and I second the request for a sequel... Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC) thank you! as for a sequel . . . we'll have to see what the muse thinks, yeah? {wink} Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
hilsongirl wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:38 pm (UTC)
I love this! And I totally understand why Spencer can't hate him. Poor Jack and poor Aaron. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC) {nods} amen. thank you for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
winky3018 wrote: May. 12th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC) Wow! A lovely story for the boys. I wouldn't mind more of this storyline. *hugs* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 12th, 2009 09:41 pm (UTC) thank you very much! as for more . . . we shall have to see what the muse thinks, yeah? {wink} Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
kyrdwyn wrote: May. 13th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC) omg, poor boys! I can so see this, though. And see why Spencer can't hate him. Love is an odd thing...... Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:48 pm (UTC) oh yes it is. thank you for the lovely feedback, kyr! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
punishmentally wrote: May. 13th, 2009 03:13 am (UTC) this is amazing. i like hannibal and this was a perfect fitting of the criminal minds verse to the hannibal one. beautiful. and i agree that a sequel would be lovely, but not necassary this stands just fine on its own. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:51 pm (UTC) thank for the lovely, lovely feedback. I was watching the movie, saw the scene where hannibal was in sterling's apartment, touching her and lighting candles. I immediately saw Hotch and Reid in those roles. it was truly an instance of inspiration and I'm so glad so many people are enjoying the fic. and thank you again for letting me know you too enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
indigocat wrote: May. 14th, 2009 01:12 am (UTC) Distrubing, but good. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:52 pm (UTC) lol thank you! exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
sin_of_pride wrote: May. 14th, 2009 01:21 am (UTC) Very intriguing, I loved the concept! I'd vote for a more in depth look at what this ficlet creates rather than a sequel, if your muse ever comes back this way :D I love how Hotch still takes care of Reid despite everything. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 15th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC) if the muse ever comes back to this fic I will definitely write more. thank you for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
whatshername87 wrote: May. 17th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC) Wow...I'm speechless. That was gorgeous! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: May. 17th, 2009 11:24 pm (UTC) Wow, speechlessness? Most awesome! Thank you! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
moonflower75 wrote: May. 26th, 2009 12:37 am (UTC) Ouch!!!! Poetic and painful. I haven't seen 'Hannibal' so I didn't know what I should expect and I loved it. You nailed perfectly what is the one thing that could drive Hotch insane and turn him into one of the perps they hunt down. And the confusion in Reid's reaction shows exactly what love can be like. thank you so much for sharing Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jul. 9th, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC) And thank *you* for such lovely feedback! I always figured Hotch was just so intense that if he wasn't a good guy he would totally be a badass bad guy! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
gwaciemcgeek wrote: May. 30th, 2009 11:34 pm (UTC) That was a fantastic story. I really really loved it. It was breathtakingly beautiful and sweet. Is it wrong that I think Hotch makes a great serial killer? Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jul. 9th, 2009 03:15 pm (UTC) Oh no, darlin', it isn't wrong at all. {nods} Thank you so much for the lovely feedback; I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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wickedground wrote: Aug. 16th, 2009 06:03 pm (UTC) this was beautiful and sad :( Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Aug. 25th, 2009 02:49 pm (UTC) thank you again, wicked! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
crydwyn wrote: Aug. 28th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC) Chilling and yet quite beautiful, thank you :D Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Oct. 27th, 2009 01:23 am (UTC) Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it struck that perfect chord between scary and beautiful. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
evil_killer_cat wrote: Aug. 31st, 2009 11:47 pm (UTC)
heartbreaking but so beautiful. wonderful story Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Oct. 27th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC) Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
kaimore wrote: Nov. 7th, 2009 03:00 am (UTC) That was creepy yet beautiful. I thought at first it was just totally AU, that Spencer had never known him as anything but a killer, and I'm glad that wasn't the case. Ohhh that last tine! *shivers* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) thank you very much for the wonderful feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
empressnan wrote: Nov. 7th, 2009 06:10 am (UTC) I thoroughly enjoyed this! I could so see Hotch going that route if that really happened to Jack. Fantastic job!! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) thank you! glad you enjoyed it! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
meganmayhem94 wrote: Nov. 13th, 2009 07:10 am (UTC) ..............I can't decided whether to hug or high five you! sooo how about both! *HugFive* Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC) lol thank you! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
artmyth wrote: Dec. 6th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC) Oh! God, would I love to see you take this further, to see their past, their future! ^^ Anyway, great piece. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:27 pm (UTC) thank you very much! their future . . . wow, I can't see anything but heartbreak there, but you never know where the muse will take me. thanks again! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (no subject) - dameange - Jan. 19th, 2010 08:27 pm (UTC) - Expand
wolfmoon8719 wrote: Dec. 15th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC) sweet heart, are you trying to kill me? Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Jan. 19th, 2010 08:28 pm (UTC) {purrs} did I succeed? Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (Anonymous) wrote: Jan. 30th, 2010 05:56 am (UTC) Oh My, Super!Sexy!Creepy Hotch. More please Link | Reply | Thread
hippediva wrote: Jan. 31st, 2010 04:10 am (UTC) Well, thank you so much! Very beautifully evocative and chilling. Brava! Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Feb. 22nd, 2011 06:08 pm (UTC) thank you so much for the lovely feedback! Link | Reply | Parent | Thread
cmali wrote: Feb. 6th, 2010 12:52 am (UTC) Wow. That was fantastic, and could so easily happen to ANY of the characters. However, I do love the story and the characterization of both Hotch and Reid. Beautiful, and yet, heart wrenching. It would be so hard to watch Reid fall in love, and then be so far from being able to have it. Just a phenomenal story, and I do hope you carry it on. Thank you so much, love. Momma. Link | Reply | Thread
dameange wrote: Feb. 22nd, 2011 06:09 pm (UTC) Thank *you* for such wonderful feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Link | Reply | Parent | Thread (Anonymous) wrote: Feb. 16th, 2010 11:21 pm (UTC) would love to see a sequel were reid makes the choice of turning hotch in or joining him. Link | Reply | Thread Page 1 of 2 << [1] [2] >> ( 67 comments — Leave a comment )
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